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how can i word this sentence ??

The risk of you being put on an operating table to make yourself resemble movie stars and singers is already bad, but wanting to make yourself go through that pain of having a heart attack, infection, or even death; is this process really worth it?
  

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Hi, how can i word this sentence ?? The risk of you being put on an operating table to make yourself resemble movie stars and singers is already bad, but wanting to make yourself go through that pain of having a heart attack, infection, or even death; is this process really worth it? It's a poorly worded sentence, and the meaning is unclear.

— Clive

  • Hi, how can i word this sentence ??
  • The risk of you being put on an operating table to make yourself resemble movie stars and singers is already bad, but wanting to make yourself go through that pain of having a heart attack, infection, or even death; is this process really worth it?
  • It's a poorly worded sentence, and the meaning is unclear.
  • Perhaps this.
  • I t is risky to allow yourself to be put on an operating table to make yourself resemble a movie star or a singer.
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Hi,
how can i word this sentence ??

The risk of you being put on an operating table to make yourself resemble movie stars and singers is already bad, but wanting to make yourself go through that pain of having a heart attack, infection, or even death; is this process really worth it?

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