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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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"She really had a crush on brandon; subsequently, he was asked out." Is this sentence correct?
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1. Brandon; B 2. Your sentence is logically awkward.
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- Brandon; B 2.
- Your sentence is logically awkward.
- 3.
- Punctuation is [Y].
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1. Brandon; B
2. Your sentence is logically awkward.
3. Punctuation is [Y].
2. Your sentence is logically awkward.
3. Punctuation is [Y].
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Hi,
The switch to passive voice in the second part makes the sentence seem odd.
Active voice would be better.
Subsequent to what event?
Clive
The switch to passive voice in the second part makes the sentence seem odd.
Active voice would be better.
Subsequent to what event?
Clive
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