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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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America has a new addiction we are obsessed with “keeping in touch”. In today’s society, few people can go an entire day without using some form of social networking. Such as Facebook and Twitter. These sites allow a user to chat with friends across the world. Also post messages, upload videos, share photos, and add event invitations for friends. All a person needs is access to a computer or even a web-enabled phone. Which makes it very easy to keep in touch with friends and family. There is a downside to social networking, it is harder to maintain privacy. Some employers are checking these sites to see what their employees are like outside of work. This can be seen as a violation of privacy. Or the price one pays for the other benefits of social networking. It can also be difficult to keep a small social circle anyone can send a “friend request”. Which can be hard to deny. Knowing the people one “friends”, staying offline at work, and being careful with one posts. These tips can help maintain a good social network. Online and offline.
  

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Hi, Y ou have a lot of errors related to sentence structure. In some cases, you are incorrectly joining two sentences by simply omitting a period. eg Wrong - Mary went home she cooked dinner.

  • Hi, Y ou have a lot of errors related to sentence structure.
  • In some cases, you are incorrectly joining two sentences by simply omitting a period.
  • eg Wrong - Mary went home she cooked dinner.
  • Right - Mary went home.
  • She cooked dinner.
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Hi,
You have a lot of errors related to sentence structure.


In some cases, you are incorrectly joining two sentences by simply omitting a period.
eg Wrong - Mary went home she cooked dinner.

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