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Carla.andres92 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
English
I need to know whether this allusion makes sense at all, my teacher marked me down for it because it was "random and irrelevant":
I have often found myself at the bottom of the hole with nothing but a plastic teaspoon to dig myself out with, and by some miracle of God, I uncovered the city of Atlantis on my way out.
Or if there is some way to improve it so that it DOES make sense, i would appreciate it.
Please and Thank You :]
I have often found myself at the bottom of the hole with nothing but a plastic teaspoon to dig myself out with, and by some miracle of God, I uncovered the city of Atlantis on my way out.
Or if there is some way to improve it so that it DOES make sense, i would appreciate it.
Please and Thank You :]
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Well, Atlantis is supposed to be covered with water. It's hard to imagine discovering Atlantis in a hole in the ground.
- Well, Atlantis is supposed to be covered with water.
- It's hard to imagine discovering Atlantis in a hole in the ground.
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Well, Atlantis is supposed to be covered with water.
It's hard to imagine discovering Atlantis in a hole in the ground.
It's hard to imagine discovering Atlantis in a hole in the ground.
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