Engineering MS Degree statement of purpose review

I don't have a fiend or a relative how did MS degree, could someone review my statement of purpose, I will appreciate your professional opinions. thank you.

Dear Selecting Committee,

Electrical power never came into my mind while pursuing undergraduate degree. Somehow it became a passion of mine, driving my interest and motivation in joining the Electrical Engineering Master’s program at ******.

My first official job was in marine’s electronic equipment as an installation and maintenance technician, at the middle of my two and a half year diploma in Telecommunication and Computer Engineering, where I had my practical experience with electronic communication systems, modelling systems and microchip circuits. A couple of months later, I was assigned as a computer maintenance intern at the information system department of *********, in order to complete a compulsory industrial training semester in my diploma. During the internship training I was mostly interfacing with computer hardware and software, while interacting with public, helping them in their computers challenges and errors, as well as servicing other electronic in the campus like projectors, routers and network servers.

Two years after, I started working as a supervisor for a fire alarm systems institute, applying my knowledge in engineering management and effective leader ship skills, while waiting my UK BEng degree certificate in Electrical and Electronic Engineering, majoring electrical power systems. Last but not least, I was offered an electrical engineer position in an electrical distribution company, where I design industrial automation control panels, airfield aviation lighting control panels and power distribution panel boards. That may include PLCs, variable speed drives or a simple direct online control. With this hand-on experience, I’m ready to move to a larger corporate structure and look forward to the learning opportunities offered by *****.

I am mostly interested in investigating the “Technical Segment” within the area of electromagnetics, solid-state interface electronic and micro-electro mechanical systems. For their exceedingly growing factor in modern day technology, with a unique designing procedures. In addition, my innate curiosity makes me emboldened into researching projects that refer to other disciplines such as power spectrum of microwave measurement, optical properties of communication and photonic techniques. However, being your talented M.S engineer, I want to gain a professional experience in my field, develop my skills in working with outstanding organization and get an insight into modern day technology procedures.

Being a dynamic and enthusiastic engineer, I’m confident that I will be an active, open minded and useful member to the faculty I join, willing to contribute during my research period. I am therefore very excited in becoming an active student at your campus and pursue my cherished wish of working on enhancing projects in a well-established environment.

Thank you for your interest in evaluating my application. My resume is enclosed herewith for your reference, containing additional information on my experience and skills. I hope that you find these of worth. I assure you that if I’m selected I won’t let you down and would prove to be an asset for your organization. I’ll appreciate the opportunity to discuss my candidacy with you, as I’m available for an interview any time at your convenience.

Yours sincerely
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