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Antonija Posted 11 years ago
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Endoprosthetic procedures
Hello everybody,
I have two questions concerning this sentence.
1) Can you help me find more adequate expression for "According to the relevant papers on this subject"? Perhaps something shorter?
2) I'm stuck with the rest of the sentence. I am not sure whether the preposition "in" is OK here.
3) Any other suggestions are more than welcome.
Thank you in advance,
Antonija
Complications
According to the relevant papers on the subject, patients with comorbidities, especially chronic heart disease, have considerably higher risk for thromboembolic incidents in the endoprosthetic procedures on hips and knees, while patients with chronic lung disease have higher risk in endoprosthetic knee procedures.
I have two questions concerning this sentence.
1) Can you help me find more adequate expression for "According to the relevant papers on this subject"? Perhaps something shorter?
2) I'm stuck with the rest of the sentence. I am not sure whether the preposition "in" is OK here.
3) Any other suggestions are more than welcome.
Thank you in advance,
Antonija
Complications
According to the relevant papers on the subject, patients with comorbidities, especially chronic heart disease, have considerably higher risk for thromboembolic incidents in the endoprosthetic procedures on hips and knees, while patients with chronic lung disease have higher risk in endoprosthetic knee procedures.
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Antonija 1) Can you help me find more adequate expression for "According to the relevant papers on this subject"? Perhaps something shorter? Current research shows that patients.
- Antonija 1) Can you help me find more adequate expression for "According to the relevant papers on this subject"?
- Perhaps something shorter?
- Current research shows that patients.
- Antonija 2) I'm stuck with the rest of the sentence.
- I am not sure whether the preposition "in" is OK here.
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Antonija1) Can you help me find more adequate expression for "According to the relevant papers on this subject"? Perhaps something shorter?Current research shows that patients...
Antonija2) I'm stuck with the rest of the sentence. I am not sure whether the preposition "in" is OK here.'During' is clearer.
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