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Contiluo Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Endless ideas

I posted an essay two weeks ago, but didn't get a full correction. Now, I post it again in paragraph as follows. Please help me make it sound natural. Thanks a lot.

There are some reasons why I love playing basketball as follows. First, it is attainable and not expensive. Basketball is very much affordable. All you need is a ball and a basketball court with a rim. If you want to play, go to the nearest basketball court available in your community or your local basketball club. I prefer to play with others rather than just playing alone because many people have creative ideas and find new ways to trick the opposing players. Playing Basketball is very entertaining since there are endless ideas you can think of just with a hoop and a basketball.
  

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contiluo There are some reasons why I love playing basketball: Firstly, it is easily attainable and not expensive. Basketball is very much affordable. All you need is a ball and a basketball court with a rim.

  • contiluo There are some reasons why I love playing basketball: Firstly, it is easily attainable and not expensive.
  • Basketball is very much affordable.
  • All you need is a ball and a basketball court with a rim.
  • If you want to go to play it, then go to the nearest basketball court available in your community or your local basketball club.
  • I prefer to play with others rather than just playing alone because many people have creative ideas and keep trying to find new ways to trick the opposing players.
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contiluoThere are some reasons why I love playing basketball: Firstly, it is easily attainable and not expensive. Basketball is very much affordable. All you need is a ball and a basketball court with a rim. If you want to go to play it, then go to the nearest basketball court available in your community or your local basketball club. I prefer to play with others rather t

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