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Dominik Posted 16 years ago
Vocabulary

Encouragement

Dear watchers/buyers, for the last time I have relisted the item so don't miss the bargain.

Do you think this encouragement can encourage the watchers or rather will discourage them.
Maybe I should write this in a differnet way?

Thanks in advance!
  

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Slightly different: Dear shoppers, I have restocked this item. Don't miss this bargain!

— Mister Micawber

  • Slightly different: Dear shoppers, I have restocked this item.
  • Don't miss this bargain!
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Slightly different:

Dear shoppers, I have restocked this item. Don't miss this bargain!
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Thanks Mister Micawber. I'm selling sth on ebay and in this info I would like to underline that the item is relisted the last time, maybe it will encourage undecided "watchers" (people who whatch my offer - they have klicked a bottom to watch my offer) to make a bid.

Probably I won't relist the item again and I wont lower the price because it wouldn't be profitable for me.
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Ah, I see. I misunderstood. So you should use 'relisted' instead of 'restocked':

Dear shoppers, I have relisted this item. Don't miss this bargain!

Still, relisting makes clear that it didn't sell the first time, so it will not attract great interest at the same price, I fear.
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Thanks. You are right but the majority of them know the item has been relisted. They are waiting for lower price but even now I will probably lose some money in this transaction (I paid for the item mouch more).

So probably I will do nothing.
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