Enclosed a Cheque
I have enclosed a cheque #00000454152 in the amount of $ 980.00 towards the payment of last semester fee for my children, Sarah John and Philip John who are studying in 3rd grade at your school.
As my husband is out of station and I am not able to do the payment through your e-school diary application provided, I request that you accept my cheque payment and kindly acknowledge the receipt of the same.
Thanking you,
Sincerely
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00 towards the payment of the last semester fee for my children, Sarah John and Philip John , who are studying in the 3rd grade at your school. As my husband is out of town and I am not able to do the payment through your e-school diary application provided, I request that you accept my cheque payment and kindly acknowledge the receipt of the same. Thanking you, Sincerely It wasn't bad, but I've made it a bit less formal.
- 00 towards the payment of the last semester fee for my children, Sarah John and Philip John , who are studying in the 3rd grade at your school.
- As my husband is out of town and I am not able to do the payment through your e-school diary application provided, I request that you accept my cheque payment and kindly acknowledge the receipt of the same.
- Thanking you, Sincerely It wasn't bad, but I've made it a bit less formal.
- Begin your letter 'Dear Mr/Mrs/Ms [name of the headteacher/bursar/school secretary].
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I have enclosed a cheque for $980.00 towards the payment of the last semester fee for my children, Sarah John and Philip John, who are studying in the 3rd grade at your school.
As my husband
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