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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

EMPLOYEE DAY OUTING

Hi,
How we can make the following paragraph in better format?

We hope you will enjoy the outing. Please prepare your family early for the trip to avoid any problems when the date nears. Please let us know how many family members will be attending and their ages, so that we can prepare accordingly.

We will be sending the invite & more details on the event shortly. Looking forward to your presence with your family and active participation!!
  

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We will be sending your invitation and more details about the event shortly. Please let us know how many family members will be attending and their ages, so that we can prepare accordingly. We are looking forward to your participation with your family.

  • We will be sending your invitation and more details about the event shortly.
  • Please let us know how many family members will be attending and their ages, so that we can prepare accordingly.
  • We are looking forward to your participation with your family.
  • We hope you will enjoy the outing!
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We will be sending your invitation and more details about the event shortly. Please let us know how many family members will be attending and their ages, so that we can prepare accordingly.

We are looking forward to your participation with your family. We hope you will enjoy the outing!

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