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Pioussoul Posted 19 years ago
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emergence of excellent performance take place

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00The part in green sounds odd and redundant to me; what do my native friends think? Would the following sound better?02br
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00Only after years of training and practice can 01font01b00the emergence of excellent performance01i01font00 be possible.02font02i02b02font02br
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0 01i 00Only after years of training and practice 01font 00may/can superior/great performance emerge. 02font 02i 0-

— Marius Hancu

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0 01i00Only after years of training and practice 01font00may/can superior/great performance emerge. 02font02i0-
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10Yes, I adore your versions, but you haven't told me if the base sentence sounds right or not.02br
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0I agree, Pioussoul, it sounds redundant. And odd. Excellence may emerge, but "excellent performance"?02br
00For that matter, training and practice are redundant.0-
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0 Pioussoul,02br
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00 Try to use "really like" instead of "adore". It's more idiomatic.02br
00 The use of "adore" in this context would be considered "over the top" (excessive) by most people!02br
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0 Only after years of training and practice can an excellent performance emerge.02br
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00 [01i00can be possible02i00 is redundant, as 01i00can (be)02i00 means 01i00be possible02i00.]02br
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