By ‘embedded sentences’ do you mean finite clauses or main clauses? Sentence 1) has problems, by the way: Alice was just beginning to think to herself 'Now, what am I to do with this creature when I get it home? ’ when it grunted agai n so violently t hat she looked down into its face in some alarm.
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Aspara GusAlice was just beginning to think to herself 'Now, what am I to do with this creature when I get it home?” when it grunted again so violently that she looked down into its face inActually, the quote, which I found online, issomealarm.
Anonymousembedded sentencesEmbedding, here, is the inclusion a clause within another clause or a sentence. In traditional grammar it is called subordination.
CalifJimI don't know why you crossed out 'some'.It just seemed oddly anticlimactic after so violently that... I mean, why just some alarm? Or does some mean “considerable”? If so it still sounds odd to me.
Aspara Guswhy just some alarm?You'll have to ask Reverend Dodgson about that.