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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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emailing HR

Hello Debbie,

This is Lucy Mendoza, I received your message. The resume I sent is updated, also attached is my cover letter explains my gap in employment please attach with my resume.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
  

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Anonymous This is Lucy Mendoza, I received your message. Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.

  • Anonymous This is Lucy Mendoza, I received your message.
  • Thank you for your time.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.
  • You have comma splices.
  • And I don't think you need to say who you are in the body of an email.
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AnonymousThis is Lucy Mendoza, I received your message. The resume I sent is updated, also attached is my cover letter explains my gap in employment please attach with my resume.Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
You have comma splices. And I don't think you need to say who you are in the body of an email. You can put your name at th

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