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Ehsan Samimi Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

Emailing

Can someone help me my below email, is it correct or not?
Dear Mr. John

I would say I have checked the bank slips which the XYZ company had paid with your summary sheet and have highlighted the cells, the rest of six months’ invoices are not paid, so please send the invoices, then they will pay.
  

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Do not use 'Mr' with a first name. Dear Mr. [surname], I have checked the bank slips for the XYZ company payments with your summary sheet and have highlighted the cells.

  • Do not use 'Mr' with a first name.
  • Dear Mr.
  • [surname], I have checked the bank slips for the XYZ company payments with your summary sheet and have highlighted the cells.
  • The rest of the six months’ invoices are not paid, so please send them invoices.
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Do not use 'Mr' with a first name.

Dear Mr. [surname],

I have checked the bank slips for the XYZ company payments with your summary sheet and have highlighted the cells. The rest of the six months’ invoices are not paid, so please send them invoices.
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Ok Thank you Mr.Mister Micawber from your helping.

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