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Ngngmaiphuong Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Email to university


Dear...,
I write to reaffirm my extreme interest in in hope of getting off the waitlist and hence am able to attend ABC.
Through tremendous research about as well as talked to current students, I find that is a perfect match for me and I deserve the chance for my dedication, determination, and hard work. I hope you will take my application into positive consideration, and, by admitting, you will give me opportunities to become a successful and responsible citizen in a global society.
I also hope you understand my family’s limited finance. I do not want to miss a great school like just because of that. Therefore, I would like to commit an on-campus job to contribute my earnings towards the school tuition.

Thank you for your time and effort and I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,

Phuong Nguyen.

Please find errors (grammar, word choice...) in the mail above.

Your help would be very much appreciated
  

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ngngmaiphuongDear...,
I write to reaffirm my extreme interest in ABC University in the hope of getting off your the wait list and hence am able to attend ABC University. (the last clause is redundant)
Through tremendous research about ABC University as well as talking talked to current A
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