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Ngngmaiphuong Posted 17 years ago
Dear Admission Committee,
My application packet includes the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr. Truong Pham. However, my Application Summary page indicates that you have received neither of them.
Please recheck my application packet.
If you cannot find those documents, please inform me. I will resend them as soon as possible.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Sincerely,
Phuong Nguyen
Please find errors (grammar, word choice...) in the mail above.
Your help would be very much appreciated.
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Dear Admission Committee,
My application packet includes the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr. Truong Pham. However, my Application Summary page indicates that you have received neither of them.
Please recheck my application packet.
If you cannot find those documents, please inform me. I will resend them as soon as possible.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Sincerely,
Phuong Nguyen
Please find errors (grammar, word choice...) in the mail above.
Your help would be very much appreciated.
Top answer
Actually, it is already very well written. I have some minor revisions- The application packet that I previously sent in included the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr. Truong Pham.
- Actually, it is already very well written.
- I have some minor revisions- The application packet that I previously sent in included the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr.
- Truong Pham.
- However, on the Application Summary that I recently received, it indicates that you have received neither of these.
- Please recheck my application package.
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Actually, it is already very well written. I have some minor revisions-
The application packet that I previously sent in included the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr. Truong Pham. However, on the Application Summary that I recently received, it indicates that you have received neither of these.
The application packet that I previously sent in included the International Student Financial Aid Application and a letter of recommendation written by my counselor, Mr. Truong Pham. However, on the Application Summary that I recently received, it indicates that you have received neither of these.
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