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Ngngmaiphuong Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Email to the university

Dear Admission Committee,
I am Phuong Nguyen, an applicant to your university this year.
I sent in my application packet 2 weeks ago. Can you tell me if it has arrived?
Sincerely,
Phuong Nguyen.


Please find errors (grammar, word choice...) in the mail above.

Thank you a lot for helping me!
  

Top answer

Phuong - There is no need to repeat your name. It is obvious from your signature. It is also obvious that you are an applicant.

  • Phuong - There is no need to repeat your name.
  • It is obvious from your signature.
  • It is also obvious that you are an applicant.
  • ) you my completed enrollment application packet 2 weeks ago.
  • Would you please inform me if you have received it?
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Phuong -
There is no need to repeat your name. It is obvious from your signature. It is also obvious that you are an applicant.
Dear Admission Committee,
I sent (mailed?) you my completed enrollment application packet 2 weeks ago. Would you please inform me if you have received it?
Sincerely,
Phuong Nguyen.
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Thank you for your help!

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