Dear Admission Committee, I am Phuong Nguyen, an applicant to your university this year. I sent in my application packet 2 weeks ago. Can you tell me if it has arrived? Sincerely, Phuong Nguyen.
Please find errors (grammar, word choice...) in the mail above.
Thank you a lot for helping me!
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Phuong - There is no need to repeat your name. It is obvious from your signature. It is also obvious that you are an applicant.
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Phuong - There is no need to repeat your name.
It is obvious from your signature.
It is also obvious that you are an applicant.
) you my completed enrollment application packet 2 weeks ago.
Would you please inform me if you have received it?
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Phuong - There is no need to repeat your name. It is obvious from your signature. It is also obvious that you are an applicant. Dear Admission Committee, I sent (mailed?) you my completed enrollment application packet 2 weeks ago. Would you please inform me if you have received it? Sincerely, Phuong Nguyen.