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Mezzopiano Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Email to congratulate a good worker

Please proofread the body of the email:

Since accepting to join us, you have been a steady and prosperous worker .During the project, I have experienced a great energy from you. I congratulate you for the hard work you put in regardless of all barriers like location constraints etc. Your flexibility was awesome .Your technical expertise was invaluable in high complexity tasks. Due to your co-operating with me, we could deliver service efficiently in the critical moment even before deadlines. Sometime you took the role of a savior. I’m looking forward to working with you in the future.

  

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I will highlight some problem areas, often with some suggestions. Also, you sentences don't flow smoothly together to deliver an overall message. Instead, it reads as though someone were trying to write several complimentary sentences without thinking of the overall message.

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  • Also, you sentences don't flow smoothly together to deliver an overall message.
  • Instead, it reads as though someone were trying to write several complimentary sentences without thinking of the overall message.
  • During the project, I have experienced enjoyed a great your energy from you .
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I will highlight some problem areas, often with some suggestions. Also, you sentences don't flow smoothly together to deliver an overall message. Instead, it reads as though someone were trying to write several complimentary sentences without thinking of the overall message.

Since accepting to joining

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