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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Email subject line

Hi,

I want to send emails to my clients who are franchisors and I was wondering if it was correct using the following subject line. " My client's name: Fish your franchisees at 'name of our company' Franchise Expo".

Or could you please suggest if you have a better subject line?

Please help me.

Regards,

Levi
  

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Well, 'fish your franchises' makes no sense at all to me, yet still manages to sound unpleasant. What is it that you are trying to say?

  • Well, 'fish your franchises' makes no sense at all to me, yet still manages to sound unpleasant.
  • What is it that you are trying to say?
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Well, 'fish your franchises' makes no sense at all to me, yet still manages to sound unpleasant. What is it that you are trying to say?

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