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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

email letter to a group leader, PLEAS HELP

Hello,
i have to whrite a email letter to a group leader, aksing for a talk.

How is this:


Dear Mr XXXXXXX,
I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is also my main subject.
I did a couple of optional interships in the lab. Beside my study I am working for Prof. Dr. XXXXX in the lab and I would like to do my diploma thesis in the Faculty of XXXXX Sciences.
Your research theme ist very interesting and I would like very much to talk with you concerning your research theme.

Sincerely,



XXXXX




Waht do you think? Is it ok?


Thanks for reading it.


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Dear Mr ***, I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is (also) my main subject. I did a couple of optional interships in the lab.

  • Dear Mr ***, I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October.
  • I am very interested in biochemistry, this is (also) my main subject.
  • I did a couple of optional interships in the lab.
  • Beside my study(,) I am working for Prof.
  • Dr.
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Dear Mr ***,
I am studying biology in Göttingen and I will do my diploma in October. I am very interested in biochemistry, this is (also) my main subject.
I did a couple of optional interships in the lab. Beside my study(,) I am working for Prof. Dr. *** in the lab and I would like to do my diploma thesis in the Faculty of *** Sciences.
Your research theme ist very interest

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