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Happyhour123 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Email- KIndly Chk Sentences for me :)
Hi, Kindly chk the sentences for me, thks .....
Dear xxx,
Refer to previous email , you’ve told us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in 1st or 2nd week of July. And this is to remind you again that Annual General Meeting (AGM) of our company is due on 31st July 2008.
Dear xxx,
Refer to previous email , you’ve told us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in 1st or 2nd week of July. And this is to remind you again that Annual General Meeting (AGM) of our company is due on 31st July 2008.
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Hi happyhour, I would have added "your" after "Refer to". Since it is a formal letter, you should write "you have informed us" instead of "told us" and "in the first or second week of " instead of "in 1st or 2nd week of". This is my correction.
- Hi happyhour, I would have added "your" after "Refer to".
- Since it is a formal letter, you should write "you have informed us" instead of "told us" and "in the first or second week of " instead of "in 1st or 2nd week of".
- This is my correction.
- I hope others will come by and go over it.
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Hi happyhour,
I would have added "your" after "Refer to".
Since it is a formal letter, you should write "you have informed us" instead of "told us" and "in the first or second week of " instead of "in 1st or 2nd week of".
This is my correction. I hope others will come by and go over it.
I would have added "your" after "Refer to".
Since it is a formal letter, you should write "you have informed us" instead of "told us" and "in the first or second week of " instead of "in 1st or 2nd week of".
This is my correction. I hope others will come by and go over it.
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happyhour123Dear ***,
Refer to previous email , you’ve told us that you can commence your audit fieldwork in 1st or 2nd week of July. And this is to remind you again that Annual General Meeting (AGM) of our company is due on 31st July 2008.
Ms ***
Please refer to your previous email. You've
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Sorry for the delay. I've about 500 posts not opened yet as I had been busy the past few days.
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Is okie, this website is just for people these people who want to improve the english & . (part time only) Actually is not your duty and responsibili"ty must" reply our question :-)
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