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Could someone take a quick look at this?

I gave an interview today regarding your assistant position. I'd like to say that part time would be just as good, so long as it is enough to do what is required and lastly, I would really like to work for your establishment as I'm pretty sure I'll like the atmosphere. If you think my skill may be adequate for the job, please let me know so as to set up an appointment with you.

I'd like to thank you for your time and hope to hear from you as soon as possible

Regards ,

xxxxxx

thank you

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Thank you for interviewing me today regarding your Assistant position.

Part-time would be fine, if it is enough to do what is required. I would like to work for your establishment, because I like the atmosphere. I hope that you find my skills adequate for the job.

Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you in the near future.

Sincerely yours,

xx

Alc24 · Answer

Can you say?

Call me so as to set up an appointment.

The SO AS TO part????
thanks

BarbaraPA · Answer

As a matter of grammar, "call me to" (without the "so as" part).

Call me to let me know you got home safely.

Call me to tell me what time I need to pick you up.

As a matter of following up after an interview, do NOT instruct them to call you.

Anonymous · Answer

A few cents worth from my experience:

With interview related letter,

alc24Could someone (PLEASE) take a quick look at this?

You need to learn the use of the word "Please" and practice it often at the forum. It will do you a lot good in the real world.

For interview letters, try to keep it simple, avoid long-drawn out sentences and phrases like "as to" and "as long as..".

Capitalize all the proper places.

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