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Hi everyone,
Could anyone please correct the grammar of my email below or revise it or shorten it. Thank you in advance.
“Our client found a mistake in our survey questionnaire. Instead of “6” we write “7” in question no. 4.
May we resend the questionnaire as revised.
ORIGINAL: What qualities do you look for in a candidate for public office? Please rank the following in order of preference with 1 being the most sought quality and 7 the least sought?
CORRECTED VERSION: What qualities do you look for in a candidate for public office? Please rank the following in order of preference with 1 being the most sought quality and 6 the least sought?
Our apologies and thank you for your kind understanding.”
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“Our client found a mistake in our survey questionnaire. Instead of “6” we wrote “7” in question no. 4.
- “Our client found a mistake in our survey questionnaire.
- Instead of “6” we wrote “7” in question no.
- 4.
- May we resend the questionnaire as revised?
- ORIGINAL: What qualities do you look for in a candidate for public office?
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“Our client found a mistake in our survey questionnaire. Instead of “6” we wrote “7” in question no. 4.
May we resend the questionnaire as revised?
ORIGINAL: What qualities do you look for in a candidate for public office? Please rank the following in order of preference with 1 being the most sought quality and 7 the least
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