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Red olive 901 Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Email grammar- Budget allocation-phl

Hi everyone,

May I ask please if the following email message is grammatically correct: Thank you very much in advance.


Dear All,

We would like to inform you that the budget allocation for the conduct of the Survey on Hepatitis B has been downloaded already to your respective regional accounts.


Please be informed also that the soft copy of the Obligation Request for the said survey was emailed yesterday, 21 March 2019.


Thank you very much.

  

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Dear All, We would like to inform you that the budget allocation for the conduct of the Survey on Hepatitis B has been downloaded already to your respective regional accounts. Please be informed also that The soft copy of the Obligation Request for the said survey was emailed yesterday, 21 March 2019 . Thank you very much.

  • Dear All, We would like to inform you that the budget allocation for the conduct of the Survey on Hepatitis B has been downloaded already to your respective regional accounts.
  • Please be informed also that The soft copy of the Obligation Request for the said survey was emailed yesterday, 21 March 2019 .
  • Thank you very much.
  • The deleted parts are not wrong.
  • They just seem unnecessary.
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Dear All,

We would like to inform you that the budget allocation for the conduct of the Survey on Hepatitis B has been downloaded already to your respective regional accounts.


Please be informed also that The soft copy of the Obligation Request for the said survey was emailed yesterday, 21 March 2019.


Thank you very much.

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