Please correct this email that I 'm sending to the recruiter again. I also include her previous email in response to my application.
My new response to follow up:
Dear Ms.
I'm writing to ask about your decision on my application. Please let me know.
Bests,
A.
Her previous email: I am happy to add your name to our list of summer candidates. In the month of March we will be reevaluating our needs to determine how many summer positions will be available. Please reach back out to me the beginning of March to discuss this further.
Dear Ms. Jones, In your prior email you asked me to get in back in touch with you at the beginning of March. I am still keenly interested in the summer internship position, and would like to get an update on the status of my application.
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Dear Ms. Jones,
In your prior email you asked me to get in back in touch with you at the beginning of March. I am still keenly interested in the summer internship position, and would like to get an update on the status of my application.
Please respond at your convenience.
Sincerely yours,
A.