0
Perfect Stranger Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

[email english] a short email - any mistakes?

Dear Users,

Could you please have a look at the following e-mail and tell me what errors it has? I guess the punctuation is not great in this one...

Hello ipVanish Team,

I've been using your client on my PC for the past 2 months and it's been functioning quite OK. Unfortunately, for some reason, I can't use your app on my iPad at all. It's impossible to establish a conncetion, regardless of the server I'm trying to get connected to. Can you please help me out?

Thanks,

Best,

XYZ
  

Top answer

“I’ve been using your client on my PC for the past 2 months and it’s been functioning quite well . Unfortunately, for some reason, I can’t use your app on my iPad at all. It’s impossible to establish a connection , regardless which server I try to connect to.

  • “I’ve been using your client on my PC for the past 2 months and it’s been functioning quite well .
  • Unfortunately, for some reason, I can’t use your app on my iPad at all.
  • It’s impossible to establish a connection , regardless which server I try to connect to.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
“I’ve been using your client on my PC for the past 2 months and it’s been functioning quite well. Unfortunately, for some reason, I can’t use your app on my iPad at all. It’s impossible to establish a connection, regardless which server I try to connect to. Can you please help me out?”

Related Questions