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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Email correction

Hi, can anyone review this email response. I need to reply to my colleagues.

No, those information are based on online news media which are The Guardian and The Star. Actually, I received the actual description from Jeet which is yesterday after I drafted them. Besides I have given the options please choose.

  

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No. That information is based on online news media, The Guardian and The Star. I received the actual description from Jeet yesterday when I had already drafted the content.

  • No.
  • That information is based on online news media, The Guardian and The Star.
  • I received the actual description from Jeet yesterday when I had already drafted the content.
  • Besides, I have given the options for you to choose (I don't understand what this means in the context)
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No. That information is based on online news media, The Guardian and The Star. I received the actual description from Jeet yesterday when I had already drafted the content. Besides, I have given the options for you to choose (I don't understand what this means in the context)

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Thank you Vsuresh.

I have done some edits as below. Please check them and give your feedback.

That information is based on online news media, The Guardian and The Star. I received the actual description from Jeet on Monday when I had already drafted the data. But now I have revised them according to the supplier’s details, try this:

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