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M-Karki Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Email Correction
Grateful if you could please do necessary correction in the text below. Thanks a lot in advance for your time and work.
Dear
Yes, there are limited desktops but we can give two laptops (total 20 laptops) with docking stations plus few monitors to each schools (10 requests). These all are public schools that are mostly in isolated locations. Only two public schools are from the city areas. All these school are operated by Nepali government where students from low income family are studied.
2) There are some broken/scrap equipment but we don't give them unless they request. One school is interested to take the scrap items. This would be used in their lab for computer education.
3) List below is the allocation of IT equipment to each schools.
<list goes here>
Grateful if you could approve the list. Thank you.
Regards, M
Dear
Yes, there are limited desktops but we can give two laptops (total 20 laptops) with docking stations plus few monitors to each schools (10 requests). These all are public schools that are mostly in isolated locations. Only two public schools are from the city areas. All these school are operated by Nepali government where students from low income family are studied.
2) There are some broken/scrap equipment but we don't give them unless they request. One school is interested to take the scrap items. This would be used in their lab for computer education.
3) List below is the allocation of IT equipment to each schools.
<list goes here>
Grateful if you could approve the list. Thank you.
Regards, M
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Hi Team, I have changed few words/lines myself. I would appreciate your another look and please correct my draft email below. Please also fell free add or delete text if you want.
- Hi Team, I have changed few words/lines myself.
- I would appreciate your another look and please correct my draft email below.
- Please also fell free add or delete text if you want.
- Thank you for your support.
- Draft ----------------- Dear Apology for giving insufficient information in my email earlier.
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Hi Team,
I have changed few words/lines myself. I would appreciate your another look and please correct my draft email below. Please also fell free add or delete text if you want. Thank you for your support.
Draft
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Dear
Apology for giving insufficient information in my email earlier.
Yes, there are limited old desktops whereas we
I have changed few words/lines myself. I would appreciate your another look and please correct my draft email below. Please also fell free add or delete text if you want. Thank you for your support.
Draft
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Dear
Apology for giving insufficient information in my email earlier.
Yes, there are limited old desktops whereas we
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