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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

email composition.

Hi, can someone please check the below email compostion? Easy to undestand?

Dear all,

Here we have total 26 titles to be revised. I have segregated the job order according to the tiles. Please see below the table chart for your next action. Please be extra careful with the spacing errors and also the missing director's name on the L2 box set. You can retrieve all the final metadata from the shared folder.

Thank you.
  

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It's much better to start with " Here in total we have 26 titles to be revised"

  • It's much better to start with " Here in total we have 26 titles to be revised"
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It's much better to start with " Here in total we have 26 titles to be revised"
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Alright, could you please check the above email sounds professional?
n a professional e-mail
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Please proofread my email. Is it difficult to understand?


Dear all,

In total we have 26 titles to be revised. I have segregated the job order according to the tiles. Please see below the table chart for your next action.

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