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email - bought item on ebay but never received it
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00 could you correct and improve this email? Context: my brother bought an item on ebay in March, but he hasn't received it yet. He opened a dispute (not sure it's the correct word choice ... he told me that's the name used on ebay, but I'm not sure ... are 01 u 00 dispute 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 formal complaint 02 u 00 appropriate here?), and soon after the seller contacted him and replied that he would have shipped the item soon. A month has passed, but the object has not arrived yet, so my brother wants to give the seller a warning and open a procedure to get his money back. Here's what I've written on his behalf: 01 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Dear Mr. XYZ, 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Since I have not received your shipment so far, I am forced to convert the dispute into a formal complaint. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 In case your shipment were delivered within the next few days, I would terminate the complaint in due course. 02 br
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01 b 00 Best regards 02 b 02 br
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00 Any suggestion would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. 0-
00 could you correct and improve this email? Context: my brother bought an item on ebay in March, but he hasn't received it yet. He opened a dispute (not sure it's the correct word choice ... he told me that's the name used on ebay, but I'm not sure ... are 01 u 00 dispute 02 u 00 and 01 u 00 formal complaint 02 u 00 appropriate here?), and soon after the seller contacted him and replied that he would have shipped the item soon. A month has passed, but the object has not arrived yet, so my brother wants to give the seller a warning and open a procedure to get his money back. Here's what I've written on his behalf: 01 b 02 br
02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Dear Mr. XYZ, 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 Since I have not received your shipment so far, I am forced to convert the dispute into a formal complaint. 02 b 02 br
02 br
01 b 00 In case your shipment were delivered within the next few days, I would terminate the complaint in due course. 02 br
02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Best regards 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 02 b 02 br
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00 Any suggestion would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. 0-
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0 I think he needs to be tougher: 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 Dear Mr XYZ, 02 b 02 br 01 b 00 On [date] you informed me that [ 01 i 00 the item 02 i 00 ] purchased from you would be despatched shortly. That was a month ago. I have still not received my purchase.
- 0 I think he needs to be tougher: 02 br 02 br 01 b 00 Dear Mr XYZ, 02 b 02 br 01 b 00 On [date] you informed me that [ 01 i 00 the item 02 i 00 ] purchased from you would be despatched shortly.
- That was a month ago.
- I have still not received my purchase.
- 02 b 02 br 01 b 00 If it does not arrive by Saturday [date], I shall convert this dispute into a formal complaint.
- 02 b 02 br 01 b 00 [name] 02 b 0-
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0 I think he needs to be tougher: 02 br
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01 b 00 Dear Mr XYZ, 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 On [date] you informed me that [ 01 i 00 the item 02 i 00 ] purchased from you would be despatched shortly. That was a month ago. I have still not received my purchase. 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 If it does not arrive by Saturday [date], I sha
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01 b 00 Dear Mr XYZ, 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 On [date] you informed me that [ 01 i 00 the item 02 i 00 ] purchased from you would be despatched shortly. That was a month ago. I have still not received my purchase. 02 b 02 br
01 b 00 If it does not arrive by Saturday [date], I sha
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