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Errykus Posted 15 years ago
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what's wrong with this sentence: "Please find herewith the attached requested information"
  

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herewith the attached mean the same thing. Furthermore is puffy, inflated and redundant. If the information is here with the letter, obviously it's attached to the letter.

  • herewith the attached mean the same thing.
  • Furthermore is puffy, inflated and redundant.
  • If the information is here with the letter, obviously it's attached to the letter.
  • It immediately identifies the writer as a non-native speaker who is just adding words to make it appear that his English is upper-class and posh.
  • The redundancy immediately betrays him.
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herewith the attached mean the same thing. Furthermore is puffy, inflated and redundant. If the information is here with the letter, obviously it's attached to the letter. It immediately identifies the writer as a non-native speaker who is just adding words to make it appear that his English is upper-class and posh. The redundancy immediately betrays him.


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Hi,

Or, if you want to be really simple, you could say 'Here is the information you requested'.

People usually see very easily that there is an attachment.

Clive

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