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Newstar Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

Email about graduation ceremony ticket and eating

Can you proofread this email for me?

Hi Ms. Lisa, I believe you have received my ticket (if not please let me know)

After the ceremony, my mother and I would like to invite you to a lunch or dinner on the same day. Either one works best for you.

Sincerely,

Yi.

  

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You did quite well. I made a few subtle changes. Dear Ms.

— MountainHiker

  • You did quite well.
  • I made a few subtle changes.
  • Dear Ms.
  • Lisa, I believe you have received my ticket.
  • If not, please let me know.
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You did quite well. I made a few subtle changes.

Dear Ms. Lisa,

I believe you have received my ticket. If not, please let me know.

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NewstarMs. Lisa,

That is an unusual salutation. We usually address people by their family names in formal letters:

Dear Mrs. Pinkerton,

And in informal letters by their first (given) name:

Dear Lisa,


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