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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Email a Prof. - Please help REVISE

Thank you for your email.

I appreciate your feedback.
I realize I need a more concrete proposal. As I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. in XXXX, I will critically evaluate my proposal and narrow it down.
I have a few ideas in mind already; though, I would like to carefully consider these ideas before amending my proposal.

I am confident that with your guidance I will be able to hone my research.
  

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Thank you very much for your your feedback. I realize I need a more concrete proposal for my application for admission to the PhD program in XXXX, so I will critically evaluate my draft proposal and narrow it down; I have a few ideas in mind already. I am confident that with your guidance I will be able to focus my research topic.

— Mister Micawber

  • Thank you very much for your your feedback.
  • I realize I need a more concrete proposal for my application for admission to the PhD program in XXXX, so I will critically evaluate my draft proposal and narrow it down; I have a few ideas in mind already.
  • I am confident that with your guidance I will be able to focus my research topic.
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Thank you very much for your your feedback.

I realize I need a more concrete proposal for my application for admission to the PhD program in XXXX, so I will critically evaluate my draft proposal and narrow it down; I have a few ideas in mind already.

I am confident that with your guidance I will be able to focus my research topic.
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