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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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Should I send the email below to Vivian? I kinda feel that I want to but I would like to ask you first since you are smarter than I am in many ways. And you are more mature than I am in other ways. You opinion is valuable to me. And I do cherish your comments.



Are they correct?


Thank you
  

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Hello BW I would change "you opinion" to "your opinion", and "cherish" to "appreciate". Otherwise, it's fine (as an email). MrP

— MrPedantic

  • Hello BW I would change "you opinion" to "your opinion", and "cherish" to "appreciate".
  • Otherwise, it's fine (as an email).
  • MrP
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Hello BW

I would change "you opinion" to "your opinion", and "cherish" to "appreciate".

Otherwise, it's fine (as an email).

MrP
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Thank you so much, MrPedantic.

Your help is greatly appprecited.

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