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Slocawber Posted 12 years ago
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Elvis's fans

It's written that Elvis Presley's fans include
Bruce Springsteen and Paul McCartney.

Can I ask:
Who are famous Elvis Presley's fans?

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slocawber Can I ask:Who are famous Elvis Presley's fans? The intent of your suggestion is probably obvious, but it is not perfectly clear that 'famous' refers to 'fans'. Improvement, to reduce the problem of reference for 'famous': What famous people are fans of Elvis Presley?

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  • slocawber Can I ask:Who are famous Elvis Presley's fans?
  • The intent of your suggestion is probably obvious, but it is not perfectly clear that 'famous' refers to 'fans'.
  • Improvement, to reduce the problem of reference for 'famous': What famous people are fans of Elvis Presley?
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slocawberCan I ask:Who are famous Elvis Presley's fans?
The intent of your suggestion is probably obvious, but it is not perfectly clear that 'famous' refers to 'fans'. Improvement, to reduce the problem of reference for 'famous': What famous people are fans of Elvis Presley? .
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