Hello, English 1b3, Your rewritten versions are correct, but I pick the first one as it does not break the normal flow of speech and places the heavier element at the end of the sentence. This is apparently the type of sentence with the first two co-ordinate clauses joined asyndetically (=without a conjunction) and the third syndetically. The first clause has all the essential sentence elements, but the second and the third one do not.
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