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Spooner Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Eliminating redundancy

To plan, develop, and distribute manufacturing drawings for different production stages: prototype production, pilot production, and mass-production

Hi,

Regarding the phrase above,

I am trying to find a way to rephrase it to avoid repeating the word "production", which I feel redundant.

or is the repetition of the word acceptable in the context?

I would appreciate the insights of English experts.

Thanks.
  

Top answer

I think the repetition is OK. This is because it is a technical sentence and the word "production" is most appropriate in each case.

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  • I think the repetition is OK.
  • This is because it is a technical sentence and the word "production" is most appropriate in each case.
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I think the repetition is OK. This is because it is a technical sentence and the word "production" is most appropriate in each case.
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Why make your reader read the same word four times in a total of 17 words?

To {develop OR make OR prepare} and distribute [manufacturing] drawings for different {manufacturing OR production} stages: prototype, pilot, and mass production.
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