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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Elevator Not Available

The following sentences are used for a notice of an apartment building.
Could you please check if they sound intelligible.

<Elevator Not Available>
Refurbishment of the elevator has been scheduled for the following dates.The elevator will be out of service during the following time due to the work.

19th Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm
20th Mar 9:00 am to 22nd Mar 5:00 pm (not available)
23rd Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm

We appreciate your understanding and apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
  

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Too many words, as usual. Elevator will be out of service for refurbishment during the following times: 19th Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm 20th Mar 9:00 am to 22nd Mar 5:00 pm 23rd Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm We apologize for this inconvenience.

— Mister Micawber

  • Too many words, as usual.
  • Elevator will be out of service for refurbishment during the following times: 19th Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm 20th Mar 9:00 am to 22nd Mar 5:00 pm 23rd Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm We apologize for this inconvenience.
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Too many words, as usual.


Elevator will be out of service for refurbishment during the following times:

19th Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm
20th Mar 9:00 am to 22nd Mar 5:00 pm
23rd Mar 9:00 am to 5:00 pm

We apologize for this inconvenience.
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Thank you very much. You are so helpful.
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