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Rayman55 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Electrical connections

"Read our ebook, get your electrical connections right."

Is the above sentence grammatically correct?

It is by an electrical wiring provider.
  

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It is a comma-splice error, but as an advertising slogan, it is common enough.

  • It is a comma-splice error, but as an advertising slogan, it is common enough.
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It is a comma-splice error, but as an advertising slogan, it is common enough.
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Thank you. Would it make sense if they said "Don't let electrical electrical connections cause delays"?
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Rayman55 Would it make sense if they said "Don't let electrical electrical connections cause delays"?
If you delete one of the two 'electrical's, yes, but adding the adjective 'faulty' or 'incorrect' would be helpful.

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