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Abil Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Electric shocks

The soldiers took him to the camp, blindfolded, beat him with a cane and gave him electric shocks.

Are there any mistakes in the sentence above? Thanka
  

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My try, He was taken to the camp by the soldiers, blindfolded ,beaten with a cane, and given electric shocks.

  • My try, He was taken to the camp by the soldiers, blindfolded ,beaten with a cane, and given electric shocks.
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My try,

He was taken to the camp by the soldiers, blindfolded ,beaten with a cane, and given electric shocks.
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He blindfold, the soldiers took him to the camp, beating him with a cane and giving him electric shocks.
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Thanks PKR and Grace.

Grace, I think mine is better than your's. And PKR has done the same thing in the passive.

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