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Electric shock

At the age of 20 I got an electric shock/electrified by an live wire a my friend who came to save me was also stucked to me, fortunately her father happen to arrive and he at once removed the plug and saved both of us.

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At the age of 20 I got an electric shock from a live wire. A friend of mine who rushed to save me also got electrocuted when she tried to pull me away from the current. Fortunately, her father then arrived and shut down the power saving us both.

  • At the age of 20 I got an electric shock from a live wire.
  • A friend of mine who rushed to save me also got electrocuted when she tried to pull me away from the current.
  • Fortunately, her father then arrived and shut down the power saving us both.
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At the age of 20 I got an electric shock from a live wire. A friend of mine who rushed to save me also got electrocuted when she tried to pull me away from the current. Fortunately, her father then arrived and shut down the power saving us both.

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