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Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

EFFORTS WAS REPAID

Dear Teachers,

1. After bitter and unstable days and months, he was determined to not get discouraged and and his persevering efforts was repaid. Finally he became a famous actor.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

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Hi, 1. After bitter and unstable days and months, he was determined to not get discouraged and and his persevering efforts was repaid. Finally he became a famous actor.

  • Hi, 1.
  • After bitter and unstable days and months, he was determined to not get discouraged and and his persevering efforts was repaid.
  • Finally he became a famous actor.
  • - Is this natural to say?
  • 'Was' is wrong, because 'efforts' is a plural word.
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Hi,

1. After bitter and unstable days and months, he was determined to not get discouraged and and his persevering efforts was repaid. Finally he became a famous actor.

- Is this natural to say?

'Was' is wrong, because 'efforts' is a plural word.

I'd also make a few improvements in style and vocabu

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