I read the following sentence (in blue) in a report.
Results from Travel operations in the third quarter reflect the reduced demand in certain markets as a result of economic uncertainty, as well as continued upward pressure on labor and other operating costs.
I am trying understand how the meaning of the sentence will change if I changed certain things. Could you please write your answer next to each of the following questions?
1. Remove ‘the’ before ‘reduced demand’ -
2. Insert ‘the’ before ‘economic activity’ as the reader knows what the author is talking about.-
3. Insert ‘the’ before ‘continued upward pressure’ -
Thanks,
MG.
Top answer
1. Remove ‘the’ before ‘reduced demand’ -- No change in meaning in the sentence 2. - -- No change in meaning in the sentence 3.
— Mister Micawber
1.
Remove ‘the’ before ‘reduced demand’ -- No change in meaning in the sentence 2.
- -- No change in meaning in the sentence 3.
Insert ‘the’ before ‘continued upward pressure’ - -- No change in meaning in the sentence .
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Thanks. With those changes (see below), would the sentence sound awkward to a native English speaker?
Results from Travel operations in the third quarter reflect reduced demand in certain markets as a result of the economic uncertainty, as well as the continued upward pressure on labor and other operating costs.