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0 Which version is considered most effective writing? Is it the first one? Is it a grammatically correct sentence. 02 br
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00 1. Once you have the estimates of the missing data availability, we could forward this to Mark. 02 br
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00 2. Once you have the estimates for the availability of the missing data, we could forward this to Mark. 02 br
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00 3. Once you have the estimates for the availability of the data that is missing, we could forward this to Mark 0-
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00 1. Once you have the estimates of the missing data availability, we could forward this to Mark. 02 br
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00 2. Once you have the estimates for the availability of the missing data, we could forward this to Mark. 02 br
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00 3. Once you have the estimates for the availability of the data that is missing, we could forward this to Mark 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br 00 If you want effective writing, I don't like any of these sentences. The main reason is that it's very vague to talk about estimating availability. What 'you' are really trying to estimate is the date on which the missing data will be available.
- 0 Hi, 02 br 00 If you want effective writing, I don't like any of these sentences.
- The main reason is that it's very vague to talk about estimating availability.
- What 'you' are really trying to estimate is the date on which the missing data will be available.
- I suggest this briefer and more direct version is more effective writing: 02 br 02 br 00 Once you have estimated when the missing data will be available, we could forward this information to Mark.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Best wishes, 02 br 00 Clive 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 02 br 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br
00 If you want effective writing, I don't like any of these sentences. The main reason is that it's very vague to talk about estimating availability. What 'you' are really trying to estimate is the date on which the missing data will be available. I suggest this briefer and more direct version is more effective writing: 02 br
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00 Once you have estimate
00 If you want effective writing, I don't like any of these sentences. The main reason is that it's very vague to talk about estimating availability. What 'you' are really trying to estimate is the date on which the missing data will be available. I suggest this briefer and more direct version is more effective writing: 02 br
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00 Once you have estimate
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0 "Once you have the estimates of how much missing data can be retrieved, we can forward them to Mark." 0-
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