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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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Effective Date of Revised Charge

For a notice placed at a vacation rental, could you please check if the following sounds formal and natural?
<Effective Date of Revised Charges>
The former utility charges will apply to reservations confirmed(or received ?) before February 20 (Thu), 2014. and they are valid for up to 180 nights/181 days. The revised charges will apply when the contract is renewed.
  

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Effective Date of Revised Charges The current utility charges will apply to reservations confirmed before Thursday, February 20, and are valid for up to 180 nights/181 days. The revised charges will apply when the contract is renewed.

  • Effective Date of Revised Charges The current utility charges will apply to reservations confirmed before Thursday, February 20, and are valid for up to 180 nights/181 days.
  • The revised charges will apply when the contract is renewed.
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Effective Date of Revised Charges

The current utility charges will apply to reservations confirmed before Thursday, February 20, and are valid for up to 180 nights/181 days. The revised charges will apply when the contract is renewed.
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