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Jackson6612 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Education should be such that it addresses modern demands
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Would you please correct/edit the sentences given below? Thank you.
1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for job, and enables one to understand future job scenario effectively.
2: Only hard work is not enough rather hard work in a proper way is recommended. You can do the same work 100 times the wrong way without producing any result.
Would you please correct/edit the sentences given below? Thank you.
1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for job, and enables one to understand future job scenario effectively.
2: Only hard work is not enough rather hard work in a proper way is recommended. You can do the same work 100 times the wrong way without producing any result.
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My suggested changes: 1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for a job, and enables one to understand the future job scenario effectively. 2: Hard work alone is not enough . R ather hard work along with proper procedure is recommended.
- My suggested changes: 1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for a job, and enables one to understand the future job scenario effectively.
- 2: Hard work alone is not enough .
- R ather hard work along with proper procedure is recommended.
- You can do the same work 100 times the wrong way without producing any result s .
- I hope this helps.
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My suggested changes:
1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for a job, and enables one to understand the future job scenario effectively.
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1: Education should be such that it addresses modern demands, prepares one for a job, and enables one to understand the future job scenario effectively.
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Hi
I agree with sbolton. But I would also remove " .. should be such that it .. ". It sounds a bit indirect and uncertain
Possibly..
- "I believe education should address modern demands, prepare one for a job, and enable one to understand the future job scenario effectively"
Regards, Dave
I agree with sbolton. But I would also remove " .. should be such that it .. ". It sounds a bit indirect and uncertain
Possibly..
- "I believe education should address modern demands, prepare one for a job, and enable one to understand the future job scenario effectively"
Regards, Dave
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Thanks a lot, sbolton, Dave.
dave_anon
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I agree with sbolton. But I would also remove " .. should be such that it .. ". It sounds a bit indirect and uncertain
Possibly..
- "I believe education should address modern demands, prepare one for a job, and enable one to understand the future j
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It wasn't meant as a strong criticism. And, when you place it in speech in that way, then it does sound perfectly OK
My instinct, when I write something is first of all to write it as I would say it; but then take out the words that we might use in speech but don't need in writing
So, if you suddenly asked me what I thought about education then, yes, I might say..
It wasn't meant as a strong criticism. And, when you place it in speech in that way, then it does sound perfectly OK
My instinct, when I write something is first of all to write it as I would say it; but then take out the words that we might use in speech but don't need in writing
So, if you suddenly asked me what I thought about education then, yes, I might say..
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