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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

editng of passage

0 Could someone please edit this short passage for me? Thanks in advance.02br
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00No animals are as smart as people. However, some are very intelligent. Apes, monkeys, dolphins and dogs can learn many things. Animals such as clams, crabs, insects and worms are the least intelligent of all. They can 00 00hardly be trained. Some animals cannot learn anything!0-
  

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0 I have a problem with the underlying argument. Clams, crabs, insect and worms can all learn - and can be trained. I think you must reconsider your premise.

— Feebs11

  • 0 I have a problem with the underlying argument.
  • Clams, crabs, insect and worms can all learn - and can be trained.
  • I think you must reconsider your premise.
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0 I have a problem with the underlying argument. Clams, crabs, insect and worms can all learn - and can be trained. I think you must reconsider your premise. All animals can learn something.02br
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00Maybe change "least" to "less".0-
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01cite10Feebs1112cite10I have a problem with the underlying argument. Clams, crabs, insect and worms can all learn - and can be trained. I think you must reconsider your premise. All animals can learn something.12br
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10You surprise me.
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