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Antonia Posted 21 years ago
Vocabulary

Editing please

0 Can you pelase make these two sentences sound better or make one sentence of the two? 02br
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00When leaving the appartment, make sure that windows and electrical appliances are turned off (air conditioner, cooker, TV, etc) and that sunshades are closed. Remember to lock the front door. 02br
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0 Yours is good and clear. I think it's ok if you add the last sentence to the first one, actually it sounds better to me. It's long, but it's ok.

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  • 0 Yours is good and clear.
  • I think it's ok if you add the last sentence to the first one, actually it sounds better to me.
  • It's long, but it's ok.
  • 02br 00...
  • turned off, sunshades are colsed and the front door is locked.
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0 Yours is good and clear. I think it's ok if you add the last sentence to the first one, actually it sounds better to me. It's long, but it's ok. 02br
00... make sure that ....turned off, sunshades are colsed and the front door is locked. 02br
00PS. Do we turn off the windows? 0-
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0 perhaps windows are closed and X is turned off? 02br
00When leaving the appartment, make sure that windows are closed, electrical appliances turned off (air conditioner, cooker, TV, etc) and sunshades closed. Remember to lock the front door. 0-
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0 In this case, you can attach windows and sunshades together: windows and sunshades are closed. 0-
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0 That's right Nima! You girls rock! 0-
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