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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

editing of passage

0 01b00This passage is meant for Year 2 students. Could someone please edit it for me? Thanks in advance.02b02br
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00Once there was a boy who thought that he was very smart. 02br
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00One day, while he and his parents were having dinner, he saw two drumsticks on a plate. He wanted to play a joke on his parents. He said, “Mum, there are three drumsticks.” 02br
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00His mother said, “No, there are two.” He insisted, “No, there are three.” 02br
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00His father, who was irritated by his son, decided to teach him a lesson. He said, “Son, since there are three drumsticks, then I will give Mum one and take the second one, and the third I will leave to you.” 02br
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00The boy realised that he had been outwitted by his father. From then onwards, he no longer joked with his parents.0-
  

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0 Many thanks, Clive, for going through the passage and letting me know that it is perfect. 0-

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