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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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0 Could you please edit this passage for me. It is meant for Year 2 students. Thanks in advance.02br
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00Samuel is a taxi driver. He takes passengers to places they want to go. 02br
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00He meets all kinds of passengers. Some are polite while others are rude. He also comes across honest and dishonest passengers. Sometimes he gives passengers the wrong change. Most of them will not return him the extra amount. Some honest passengers will return him the extra amount after telling him that he has given them the wrong change. If he returns them less, most of them will inform him that he has given them the wrong change. Some passengers leave behind mobile phones and other things. Samuel will hand them over to the police so that the things can be returned to the owners. 02br
00Samuel likes his job as a taxi driver because he likes to meet people and talk to them. He is proud of the fact that he knows almost all the areas in Singapore.0-
  

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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10Could you please edit this passage for me. It is meant for Year 2 students. 12br 12br 12br 12blockquote 10Samuel is a taxi driver.

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Yoong Liat12cite 10Could you please edit this passage for me.
  • It is meant for Year 2 students.
  • 12br 12br 12br 12blockquote 10Samuel is a taxi driver.
  • He takes passengers to places they want to go.
  • 02br 02br 00He meets all kinds of passengers.
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01cite10Yoong Liat12cite10Could you please edit this passage for me. It is meant for Year 2 students. Thanks in advance.12br
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10Samuel is a taxi driver. He takes passengers to places they want to go. 02br
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0 Thanks, Amy, for editing the passage. I agree with you that there are too many 'wills'.00 0-

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