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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
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0 Could you please edit this passage for me. It is meant for Year 2 students. Thanks in advance. 02 br
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00 Samuel is a taxi driver. He takes passengers to places they want to go. 02 br
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00 He meets all kinds of passengers. Some are polite while others are rude. He also comes across honest and dishonest passengers. Sometimes he gives passengers the wrong change. Most of them will not return him the extra amount. Some honest passengers will return him the extra amount after telling him that he has given them the wrong change. If he returns them less, most of them will inform him that he has given them the wrong change. Some passengers leave behind mobile phones and other things. Samuel will hand them over to the police so that the things can be returned to the owners. 02 br
00 Samuel likes his job as a taxi driver because he likes to meet people and talk to them. He is proud of the fact that he knows almost all the areas in Singapore. 0-
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00 Samuel is a taxi driver. He takes passengers to places they want to go. 02 br
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00 He meets all kinds of passengers. Some are polite while others are rude. He also comes across honest and dishonest passengers. Sometimes he gives passengers the wrong change. Most of them will not return him the extra amount. Some honest passengers will return him the extra amount after telling him that he has given them the wrong change. If he returns them less, most of them will inform him that he has given them the wrong change. Some passengers leave behind mobile phones and other things. Samuel will hand them over to the police so that the things can be returned to the owners. 02 br
00 Samuel likes his job as a taxi driver because he likes to meet people and talk to them. He is proud of the fact that he knows almost all the areas in Singapore. 0-
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0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Yoong Liat 12 cite 10 Could you please edit this passage for me. It is meant for Year 2 students. 12 br 12 br 12 br 12 blockquote 10 Samuel is a taxi driver.
- 0 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Yoong Liat 12 cite 10 Could you please edit this passage for me.
- It is meant for Year 2 students.
- 12 br 12 br 12 br 12 blockquote 10 Samuel is a taxi driver.
- He takes passengers to places they want to go.
- 02 br 02 br 00 He meets all kinds of passengers.
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0 Thanks, Amy, for editing the passage. I agree with you that there are too many 'wills'. 00 0-
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